For the past few weeks we have been learning about persuasive writing. When we were done that we had to mark it.
Persuasive writing is when you are trying to convince someone to do something.
I wrote it about how scooting should be allowed in school.
The thing I found challenging was marking my work
In my opinion kids should be allowed to scooter at morning tea and lunch times. There are some bad things but there are some good things as well, and I have got a lot of good reasons in my bag.
Here are two reasons why It gets people motivated to get out of the classroom. It could be a good bonding time for you and your friends. And it gets you and your friends moving and getting fit and health. It could persuade you to make new friends at the same time.
Most people agree that people are learning to take risks in a safe environment. When you're learning you keep persisting and persevering. You are also stepping out of your comfort zone which is a good thing because a lot of people don’t do that. Plus you are trying new things.
Scootering is a good sport, it’s fun and you teach others and others teach you. It’s a good leadership opportunity for you and others. It is also a good learning time, What is bad about learning? I also think that it is something different for the playground
Overall there are more reasons you should be allowed scooter in schools than there are for you shouldn't be allowed which is why I think scooting should be allowed in school.

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