For the past 3 weeks I have been writing a persuasive text about why I want to paint my room. I has taken me awhile but I am very proud of it.
Why can’t I paint my room? I want my room painted because it will make my room cooler and make my family and friends jealous. I might have a hidden talent in art and my Mum and Dad just haven’t seen it yet.
I’m the one that spends time in there. The people that live in my house don’t spend most of their day in there I do. All of my things are in my room so if I get paint on them that’s my problem. I won’t make my parents deal with it.
Why can’t I paint my room? I want my room painted because it will make my room cooler and make my family and friends jealous. I might have a hidden talent in art and my Mum and Dad just haven’t seen it yet.
I’m the one that spends time in there. The people that live in my house don’t spend most of their day in there I do. All of my things are in my room so if I get paint on them that’s my problem. I won’t make my parents deal with it.
I am the person that keeps it clean and tidy. It’s not like my Mum, Dad or anyone else in my family keeps my room tidy. If I make a huge mess I would clean it up not my parents and I wouldn’t need them to help me either.
I should be allowed to put some of my interests on my wall. My interests entertain me, so why can’t I have something that entertains me on my bedroom wall? Some days I might be really bored and then look at my wall and it gets me excited again.
So that’s why I think I should paint my room. I hope you were listening to that mum and dad. So now you know what’s coming when I ask.
What I want my walls to look like,
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