Hey Rykin, I really like the images and text you have used on your poster. I think you have a good understanding of what a quality comment should include. This reminds me of all the work we are doing around creating quality comments. I wonder if you know why you need to end with a question? To make this post better I would be thinking about the size of each area. There is a lot of watermelon coming through which takes away from the message that you are trying to get across. Have you thought about maybe using a background that is not so busy?
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Hey Rykin,
ReplyDeleteI really like the images and text you have used on your poster. I think you have a good understanding of what a quality comment should include. This reminds me of all the work we are doing around creating quality comments. I wonder if you know why you need to end with a question? To make this post better I would be thinking about the size of each area. There is a lot of watermelon coming through which takes away from the message that you are trying to get across. Have you thought about maybe using a background that is not so busy?