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Friday, 13 May 2016

Stuck On A Plane

Today I made A piece of Writing about me on a giant paper plane it is not finished yet but I am proud of it. The first thing we had to do is look at the picture that Mrs Raisin showed. Then we had to write about if it was us that was on the giant plane. This is my writing

I woke up and found myself on a giant paper plane as it was zooming through space and had three questions for myself.
Did I Shrink or did the plane become giant?
How am I breathing in space?
How did I get here?
The first two questions could wait so I think very hard and tried to remember…


It was a sunny Tuesday Morning I woke up on my birthday and went straight outside to find my Mum and Dad so I could open my presents but found a giant paper plane with all my presents on them. I hopped on to open them but then the plane started drifting into the air. I tried to yell for help and then my Mum and Dad ran out and said “It’s OK we set the plane up to come back once you have been around the world” I said “how long will that take” and they replied “about 5 years”. At that point I could no longer see them. I fell asleep and that brings us to this point.
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1 comment:

  1. Hi Rykin

    Cool story I like that it is really imaginative and funny. When I read the first sentence ( It was a sunny Tuesday Morning I woke up on my birthday and went straight outside to find my Mum and Dad so I could open my presents but found this giant paper plane with all my presents on them)

    I thought it was true. Is it really your birthday though. Bye

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