For the past few weeks we have been doing experience writing and it was about minties. We tasted minties and then used our senses to describe the experience.
I couldn’t stand not being able to open the lolly that looked like a Christmas present called a mintie. Dool was escaping my mouth from looking at the rectangular prism. I was so sad I couldn’t put it straight into my mouth, I wanted to cry:(
It smelt like a mix fresh mint bubblegum and paper in the rapper. It felt squishy but at the same time hard as a brick. Looking at it I could see the colors of Christmas. I was more excited than a boy on Christmas morning.
When I opened the sounds of bacon sizzling in a pan reached my ears. When I took the Mintie out of the wrapper I felt soft smooth sides with sharp edges. Once the wrapper was removed the smell of eclipse mint hit my nose.
An explosion happened as I put the mintie in my mouth. My taste buds were having a New Year's celebration. It was delicious. I had to use my tongue to get the delicious lolly out of my teeth. As I was chewing on the mintie it was swirling around with my saliva. It was so fresh I felt like I had just brushed my teeth.
After I was finished I wanted more and more. I guess I couldn’t get another and once again I was sad:( I think I am the biggest fan of Minties.
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