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Monday, 23 November 2020

Persuasive Writing: Current issues/topics in NZ

 LO: We are learning to express our views on a topical issue using "Write that essay" sentences.


Should teachers be allowed to carry guns at school?


My Perspective:

#1) The Simple Sentence

I don't think teachers should be allowed to carry guns around school.

#11) The W-start sentence

While I can see why it could be necessary, I don't think it's needed to be armed while in a school as there can be many negatives.

#2) Very Short Sentence

Teachers shouldn't be armed.


Other Perspective:

#3) The Power Sentence

It will be a good idea for teachers to be armed around the school.

#12) Explore The Subject

Armed teachers, this is a good idea for themselves and students, this is for their safety. 

#1) The Simple Sentence

Teachers should be allowed to carry guns around school.



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